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I am writing to inquire a proper and also concise way of writing the following case in a research article:




We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA, and the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.




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We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA; the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.




So the differences are how I connect those two short sentences within the parentheses. It seems to me that the second way is more succinct, but I really have no idea whether this is grammarly correct. Could anyone shed some lights on this? Thank you!









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    I am writing to inquire a proper and also concise way of writing the following case in a research article:




    We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA, and the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.




    or




    We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA; the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.




    So the differences are how I connect those two short sentences within the parentheses. It seems to me that the second way is more succinct, but I really have no idea whether this is grammarly correct. Could anyone shed some lights on this? Thank you!









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      I am writing to inquire a proper and also concise way of writing the following case in a research article:




      We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA, and the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.




      or




      We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA; the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.




      So the differences are how I connect those two short sentences within the parentheses. It seems to me that the second way is more succinct, but I really have no idea whether this is grammarly correct. Could anyone shed some lights on this? Thank you!









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      I am writing to inquire a proper and also concise way of writing the following case in a research article:




      We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA, and the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.




      or




      We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA; the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.




      So the differences are how I connect those two short sentences within the parentheses. It seems to me that the second way is more succinct, but I really have no idea whether this is grammarly correct. Could anyone shed some lights on this? Thank you!







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