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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of tourists number to Australia and Germany across four regions in the world throughout the period examined.
It is of note that the most significant number of tourism in Australia was European in 1960; however, the data reversed regarding in 2010. For Germany, while the data for European and British declined , the opposite was true with Asian and American.
Looking at more details, in terms of Australia, travelling-European was dominant in the first place with 53% in 1960, making it was two times more than British visitors. Asian and American were accounted for 12% and 10% respectively. After five decades; however, the scenario changed and the data on the number of Asian tourists was exponential growth to nearly two-thirds. This created corresponding reduction in others visiting this Southern continent.
As regards Germany, European visitors similarly constituted the majority at 45%. This was followed by Americans with a quarter of arrivals. The number of British doubled that of Asian in 1960. Over the course of 50 years, European held identical rank but minimally declined to two-fifths. There was just over two-fold increase in the number of Asian tourism, making it almost as many as that of Americans. In 2010, British people visiting Germany were nowhere near as many as the others.
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of tourists number to Australia and Germany across four regions in the world throughout the period examined.
It is of note that the most significant number of tourism in Australia was European in 1960; however, the data reversed regarding in 2010. For Germany, while the data for European and British declined , the opposite was true with Asian and American.
Looking at more details, in terms of Australia, travelling-European was dominant in the first place with 53% in 1960, making it was two times more than British visitors. Asian and American were accounted for 12% and 10% respectively. After five decades; however, the scenario changed and the data on the number of Asian tourists was exponential growth to nearly two-thirds. This created corresponding reduction in others visiting this Southern continent.
As regards Germany, European visitors similarly constituted the majority at 45%. This was followed by Americans with a quarter of arrivals. The number of British doubled that of Asian in 1960. Over the course of 50 years, European held identical rank but minimally declined to two-fifths. There was just over two-fold increase in the number of Asian tourism, making it almost as many as that of Americans. In 2010, British people visiting Germany were nowhere near as many as the others.
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of tourists number to Australia and Germany across four regions in the world throughout the period examined.
It is of note that the most significant number of tourism in Australia was European in 1960; however, the data reversed regarding in 2010. For Germany, while the data for European and British declined , the opposite was true with Asian and American.
Looking at more details, in terms of Australia, travelling-European was dominant in the first place with 53% in 1960, making it was two times more than British visitors. Asian and American were accounted for 12% and 10% respectively. After five decades; however, the scenario changed and the data on the number of Asian tourists was exponential growth to nearly two-thirds. This created corresponding reduction in others visiting this Southern continent.
As regards Germany, European visitors similarly constituted the majority at 45%. This was followed by Americans with a quarter of arrivals. The number of British doubled that of Asian in 1960. Over the course of 50 years, European held identical rank but minimally declined to two-fifths. There was just over two-fold increase in the number of Asian tourism, making it almost as many as that of Americans. In 2010, British people visiting Germany were nowhere near as many as the others.
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of tourists number to Australia and Germany across four regions in the world throughout the period examined.
It is of note that the most significant number of tourism in Australia was European in 1960; however, the data reversed regarding in 2010. For Germany, while the data for European and British declined , the opposite was true with Asian and American.
Looking at more details, in terms of Australia, travelling-European was dominant in the first place with 53% in 1960, making it was two times more than British visitors. Asian and American were accounted for 12% and 10% respectively. After five decades; however, the scenario changed and the data on the number of Asian tourists was exponential growth to nearly two-thirds. This created corresponding reduction in others visiting this Southern continent.
As regards Germany, European visitors similarly constituted the majority at 45%. This was followed by Americans with a quarter of arrivals. The number of British doubled that of Asian in 1960. Over the course of 50 years, European held identical rank but minimally declined to two-fifths. There was just over two-fold increase in the number of Asian tourism, making it almost as many as that of Americans. In 2010, British people visiting Germany were nowhere near as many as the others.
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