Connect two sentences within parentheses
I am writing to inquire a proper and also concise way of writing the following case in a research article:
We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA, and the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.
or
We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA; the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.
So the differences are how I connect those two short sentences within the parentheses. It seems to me that the second way is more succinct, but I really have no idea whether this is grammarly correct. Could anyone shed some lights on this? Thank you!
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I am writing to inquire a proper and also concise way of writing the following case in a research article:
We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA, and the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.
or
We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA; the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.
So the differences are how I connect those two short sentences within the parentheses. It seems to me that the second way is more succinct, but I really have no idea whether this is grammarly correct. Could anyone shed some lights on this? Thank you!
grammar
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I am writing to inquire a proper and also concise way of writing the following case in a research article:
We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA, and the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.
or
We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA; the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.
So the differences are how I connect those two short sentences within the parentheses. It seems to me that the second way is more succinct, but I really have no idea whether this is grammarly correct. Could anyone shed some lights on this? Thank you!
grammar
I am writing to inquire a proper and also concise way of writing the following case in a research article:
We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA, and the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.
or
We check each item A (item A in XXX is represented as AA; the value of its first operand specifies the condition) and flag secret-dependent item A.
So the differences are how I connect those two short sentences within the parentheses. It seems to me that the second way is more succinct, but I really have no idea whether this is grammarly correct. Could anyone shed some lights on this? Thank you!
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