Is this sentence right? (Sentence-structure, comma, and so on)
"Working at the company, I found my expertise in the accounting field was improved all the time and at the same time, I began to realize that besides the solid accounting knowledge, I need to have a deep understanding of other areas to achieve my goal of becoming a chief accountant in a large company such as: Finance, Human Resources and Management."
Is there any thing wrong in the sentence such as grammar, comma mark, meaning,... ? The mark ", " that i used after" that clause" is right?
This is very important to me. I want to to make it perfect, so i really need your help. Thanks!!!
meaning grammatical-structure
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"Working at the company, I found my expertise in the accounting field was improved all the time and at the same time, I began to realize that besides the solid accounting knowledge, I need to have a deep understanding of other areas to achieve my goal of becoming a chief accountant in a large company such as: Finance, Human Resources and Management."
Is there any thing wrong in the sentence such as grammar, comma mark, meaning,... ? The mark ", " that i used after" that clause" is right?
This is very important to me. I want to to make it perfect, so i really need your help. Thanks!!!
meaning grammatical-structure
asked 5 mins ago
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"Working at the company, I found my expertise in the accounting field was improved all the time and at the same time, I began to realize that besides the solid accounting knowledge, I need to have a deep understanding of other areas to achieve my goal of becoming a chief accountant in a large company such as: Finance, Human Resources and Management."
Is there any thing wrong in the sentence such as grammar, comma mark, meaning,... ? The mark ", " that i used after" that clause" is right?
This is very important to me. I want to to make it perfect, so i really need your help. Thanks!!!
meaning grammatical-structure
asked 5 mins ago
TamTam
211
"Working at the company, I found my expertise in the accounting field was improved all the time and at the same time, I began to realize that besides the solid accounting knowledge, I need to have a deep understanding of other areas to achieve my goal of becoming a chief accountant in a large company such as: Finance, Human Resources and Management."
Is there any thing wrong in the sentence such as grammar, comma mark, meaning,... ? The mark ", " that i used after" that clause" is right?
This is very important to me. I want to to make it perfect, so i really need your help. Thanks!!!
meaning grammatical-structure
meaning grammatical-structure
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TamTam
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TamTam
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