Correct wording/spelling for our company's new slogan
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I work for a small company (located in Italy) which makes websites and sells/repairs computers.
Right now we are in the process of creating a new logo and updating our slogan / corporate design.
My colleagues / boss came up with the following idea for a slogan: (none of us are native english speakers)
[COMPANY NAME]
links the digital world
Now - I'm really not sure if "links the digital world" is correct or does even make sense at all. I think the idea was that we - as a company - link our clients to the digital world, but "linking you to the digital world" was apparently too long and/or clumsy. In my opinion, it should as least be "links the digital world TO something" or "linking the digital world".
I need your assistance as native english speakers: How does this slogan sound to you
Thanks!
grammar orthography slogan
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I work for a small company (located in Italy) which makes websites and sells/repairs computers.
Right now we are in the process of creating a new logo and updating our slogan / corporate design.
My colleagues / boss came up with the following idea for a slogan: (none of us are native english speakers)
[COMPANY NAME]
links the digital world
Now - I'm really not sure if "links the digital world" is correct or does even make sense at all. I think the idea was that we - as a company - link our clients to the digital world, but "linking you to the digital world" was apparently too long and/or clumsy. In my opinion, it should as least be "links the digital world TO something" or "linking the digital world".
I need your assistance as native english speakers: How does this slogan sound to you
Thanks!
grammar orthography slogan
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I work for a small company (located in Italy) which makes websites and sells/repairs computers.
Right now we are in the process of creating a new logo and updating our slogan / corporate design.
My colleagues / boss came up with the following idea for a slogan: (none of us are native english speakers)
[COMPANY NAME]
links the digital world
Now - I'm really not sure if "links the digital world" is correct or does even make sense at all. I think the idea was that we - as a company - link our clients to the digital world, but "linking you to the digital world" was apparently too long and/or clumsy. In my opinion, it should as least be "links the digital world TO something" or "linking the digital world".
I need your assistance as native english speakers: How does this slogan sound to you
Thanks!
grammar orthography slogan
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I work for a small company (located in Italy) which makes websites and sells/repairs computers.
Right now we are in the process of creating a new logo and updating our slogan / corporate design.
My colleagues / boss came up with the following idea for a slogan: (none of us are native english speakers)
[COMPANY NAME]
links the digital world
Now - I'm really not sure if "links the digital world" is correct or does even make sense at all. I think the idea was that we - as a company - link our clients to the digital world, but "linking you to the digital world" was apparently too long and/or clumsy. In my opinion, it should as least be "links the digital world TO something" or "linking the digital world".
I need your assistance as native english speakers: How does this slogan sound to you
Thanks!
grammar orthography slogan
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