A message to ex, guys could you help me with editing?
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I broke up with my boyfriend and I wanted to send him this message. I don’t feel that I use correct way of many words. Could you help me to make it a perfect acute message that will motivate him to say me yes.
Hey. How are you? Hope all is well. You know, I often think of you lately. Enough time has passed since our separation, but I can only now soberly assess the situation. At some point, I completely lost my individuality, and so stupidly prioritized. Please forgive me for this. This break helped me realize and understand many important things. I respect your feelings and your opinion. But maybe you would be open to meeting with me. I just want to see you as my old friend, whom I have not seen for 100 years. Just to understand that you are doing well and you are no longer angry with me.
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I broke up with my boyfriend and I wanted to send him this message. I don’t feel that I use correct way of many words. Could you help me to make it a perfect acute message that will motivate him to say me yes.
Hey. How are you? Hope all is well. You know, I often think of you lately. Enough time has passed since our separation, but I can only now soberly assess the situation. At some point, I completely lost my individuality, and so stupidly prioritized. Please forgive me for this. This break helped me realize and understand many important things. I respect your feelings and your opinion. But maybe you would be open to meeting with me. I just want to see you as my old friend, whom I have not seen for 100 years. Just to understand that you are doing well and you are no longer angry with me.
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Welcome to the site. Unfortunately proof-reading is off-topic here so your question is likely to be closed. Let me just say that your message is perfectly clear and is written in your own heartfelt words. This is surely better than having some stranger 'improve' it for you.
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Thank you! I really appreciate it
– Sophie Arnold
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I broke up with my boyfriend and I wanted to send him this message. I don’t feel that I use correct way of many words. Could you help me to make it a perfect acute message that will motivate him to say me yes.
Hey. How are you? Hope all is well. You know, I often think of you lately. Enough time has passed since our separation, but I can only now soberly assess the situation. At some point, I completely lost my individuality, and so stupidly prioritized. Please forgive me for this. This break helped me realize and understand many important things. I respect your feelings and your opinion. But maybe you would be open to meeting with me. I just want to see you as my old friend, whom I have not seen for 100 years. Just to understand that you are doing well and you are no longer angry with me.
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I broke up with my boyfriend and I wanted to send him this message. I don’t feel that I use correct way of many words. Could you help me to make it a perfect acute message that will motivate him to say me yes.
Hey. How are you? Hope all is well. You know, I often think of you lately. Enough time has passed since our separation, but I can only now soberly assess the situation. At some point, I completely lost my individuality, and so stupidly prioritized. Please forgive me for this. This break helped me realize and understand many important things. I respect your feelings and your opinion. But maybe you would be open to meeting with me. I just want to see you as my old friend, whom I have not seen for 100 years. Just to understand that you are doing well and you are no longer angry with me.
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Sophie Arnold
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Sophie Arnold is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
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Welcome to the site. Unfortunately proof-reading is off-topic here so your question is likely to be closed. Let me just say that your message is perfectly clear and is written in your own heartfelt words. This is surely better than having some stranger 'improve' it for you.
– Shoe
7 hours ago
Thank you! I really appreciate it
– Sophie Arnold
7 hours ago
add a comment |
Welcome to the site. Unfortunately proof-reading is off-topic here so your question is likely to be closed. Let me just say that your message is perfectly clear and is written in your own heartfelt words. This is surely better than having some stranger 'improve' it for you.
– Shoe
7 hours ago
Thank you! I really appreciate it
– Sophie Arnold
7 hours ago
Welcome to the site. Unfortunately proof-reading is off-topic here so your question is likely to be closed. Let me just say that your message is perfectly clear and is written in your own heartfelt words. This is surely better than having some stranger 'improve' it for you.
– Shoe
7 hours ago
Welcome to the site. Unfortunately proof-reading is off-topic here so your question is likely to be closed. Let me just say that your message is perfectly clear and is written in your own heartfelt words. This is surely better than having some stranger 'improve' it for you.
– Shoe
7 hours ago
Thank you! I really appreciate it
– Sophie Arnold
7 hours ago
Thank you! I really appreciate it
– Sophie Arnold
7 hours ago
add a comment |
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Welcome to the site. Unfortunately proof-reading is off-topic here so your question is likely to be closed. Let me just say that your message is perfectly clear and is written in your own heartfelt words. This is surely better than having some stranger 'improve' it for you.
– Shoe
7 hours ago
Thank you! I really appreciate it
– Sophie Arnold
7 hours ago