“Changed or improved”?
We have the following text on a feedback page on a website we have been working on:
“We'd love to hear what you think about any [Product name] feature or aspect — including anything you'd like to see changed or improved!”
I just realised someone probably wouldn’t suggest a change if it wasn’t going to improve the product. So the last three words may not make sense. Do they? Is there a better way to word it?
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We have the following text on a feedback page on a website we have been working on:
“We'd love to hear what you think about any [Product name] feature or aspect — including anything you'd like to see changed or improved!”
I just realised someone probably wouldn’t suggest a change if it wasn’t going to improve the product. So the last three words may not make sense. Do they? Is there a better way to word it?
grammar
asked yesterday
user1946932user1946932
185
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I see nothing wrong with the wording. At most you might consider omitting "changed or".
– Hot Licks
yesterday
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We have the following text on a feedback page on a website we have been working on:
“We'd love to hear what you think about any [Product name] feature or aspect — including anything you'd like to see changed or improved!”
I just realised someone probably wouldn’t suggest a change if it wasn’t going to improve the product. So the last three words may not make sense. Do they? Is there a better way to word it?
grammar
asked yesterday
user1946932user1946932
185
We have the following text on a feedback page on a website we have been working on:
“We'd love to hear what you think about any [Product name] feature or aspect — including anything you'd like to see changed or improved!”
I just realised someone probably wouldn’t suggest a change if it wasn’t going to improve the product. So the last three words may not make sense. Do they? Is there a better way to word it?
grammar
grammar
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user1946932user1946932
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asked yesterday
user1946932user1946932
185
asked yesterday
user1946932user1946932
185
asked yesterday
user1946932user1946932
185
asked yesterday
user1946932user1946932
185
185
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I see nothing wrong with the wording. At most you might consider omitting "changed or".
– Hot Licks
yesterday
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I see nothing wrong with the wording. At most you might consider omitting "changed or".
– Hot Licks
yesterday
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I see nothing wrong with the wording. At most you might consider omitting "changed or".
– Hot Licks
yesterday
I see nothing wrong with the wording. At most you might consider omitting "changed or".
– Hot Licks
yesterday
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I see nothing wrong with the wording. At most you might consider omitting "changed or".
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